By: Jennifer Ripley
A nice parable-like tale but the meat of the story was a bit thin for me and the ending didn’t knock me off my feet I think because the middle section didn’t have enough words to build up to it...
View ArticleBy: Linda Simoni-Wastila
Well there’s an interesting twist on the doomsday tale. We often get what we wish for–but not what we expect. Well-played. Peace…
View ArticleBy: Tee Ways
I’m not sure I fully understand this story or the main character’s motivations. After only 2 days, I wouldn’t expect him to be tired of food and warmth and a clean bed. Maybe he’d wish away the crowds,...
View ArticleBy: Erin Ryan
Your last three sentences are perfect. That’s one of the best endings I have ever read.
View ArticleBy: Chloe Banks
I found the writing in places to be a little too rushed – like the author needed another couple of hundred words but didn’t want to cut anything out. But the structure was really good and the ending...
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